"REPORT CARD" TEMPLATE
(A guide to the document each student creates and turns in over each reading
assignment to satisfy the writing assignment)
Give a letter grade score (either A, B, or C) across seven categories of evaluation (see rubric) with a short commentary explaining any B or C scores. Do not give all A grades. Then, immediately under your scores, include a paragraph or two (250 words minimum - by doing enough of these, they will add up to eight pages of writing) providing grammatically correct commentary which fully explains and justifies your overall evaluation as well as demonstrates what you've learned or understood from reading the material. A sample appears below, but please remember it's a sample and you should come up with your own version.
To: instructor
From: name of student (use full name as enrolled in
course)
Assignment: be sure to name the lecture note you're evaluating
(e.g., Asymmetric War lecture)
1. B --- the writing used too
many weasel words...
2.
A
3. B --- a chart or diagram
would have helped my understanding...
4.
A
5. B --- there should have been
more coverage of the current crisis in Iran...
6.
A
7. C --- this lecture was
useless to me as I don't really care about anything asymmetric...
Comments: I give this
lecture note a B+ overall because it's informative, even though some of the
material is confusing and over my head. It seems to go into theoretical or
definitional matters too deeply. The author convincingly says that certain
things are important, like as one line reads "IPsec protocol can subsume VPN
privileges" but I'm not all that interested in the techno-geek details as well
as theoretical debates over the definition of asymmetric warfare. I
expected or would have preferred to learn about which countries were
attacking us with computers and what can be done about it. Don't get me
wrong; the lecture note was useful in other ways. It helped me understand
the full scope of the problem, such as the fact I learned that 50
countries have advanced cyberwarfare units. It would have been helpful to
have some images or pictures in some places to better understand some ideas.
My biggest critique, however, is that the reading was lengthy and a chore to
read. I think it also lacked a "voice" or strong author opinion in some
places because they seemed to skirt away on some issues or sit on the fence.
One thing I've learned from this and other readings is that without
considering the personal element, one can easily get bogged down in a bunch of
relativism where anything goes theoretically. I clicked on and followed
some of the web links in the reading, and the one I found most interesting led
to the Council on Foreign Relations. I might also mention that the link to
Korean Hacker Quarterly is broken and doesn't work. I tried searching for
where that website might have gone, but couldn't find anything. In terms
of suggested printed resources in the bibliography, I think the book entitled
"Crusaders, Criminals, and Crazies" looks the most interesting to me for
possibly read later on. I think this lecture ought to be required reading
for this course and others. I certainly could have used it when I was
working on a term paper in a class I had last semester....
Another thing I learned from this lecture
was...[second paragraph optional]
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RUBRIC FOR DOCUMENTATION OF READING/WRITING | |||
| Grade of C | Grade of B | Grade of A | |
| 1. Authority | There is no telling what kind of person wrote this, perhaps a nut (why?) | You cannot tell much about the author who wrote this; it's kind of wishy washy (why?) | It is clear from the "voice" and content that the author legitimately knows their stuff. |
| 2. Objectivity | The writing is nothing but a soapbox and full of bias (why?) | The content contains some bias that is noticeable but not annoying (why?) | The page is free and clear of bias. |
| 3. Organization and Purpose |
The content is not organized and does not seem to have any purpose (why?) | The content is not well-organized and the purpose is hard to understand (why?) | The content is right on point for me and is well organized. |
| 4. Audience | The page is not written at a level appropriate for me (give examples? why?) | The writing is sometimes over my head but I can get most of it (give examples?) | The writing is at an appropriate and suitable level for me to get everything out of it. |
| 5. Currency | Information does not seem to have been revised in while (how so?) | Information has been updated, but still seems to lack currency (how so?) | Information has been recently updated and is current on top of everything. |
| 6. Design | The visual appearance is poor and unpleasant (how so?) | The appearance is adequate but could be improved (suggest how?) | The appearance is completely easy to read for understanding. |
| 7. Learning | The information is useless for me in terms of my thinking or learning objectives (why?) | The information is interesting but still doesn't challenge me much or help with my learning (why?) | The information challenges me to think, reflect, and learn. |
| Comments: | In the comments section, students should write a short essay (three or four sentences) about what they got the most out of the assigned reading, elaborate on the (why?) or (how so?) responses to any C or B evaluations they give across the 7 criteria, and in general, make some kind of meaningful, unique statement which demonstrates that they have indeed done the reading. Usually some personal reaction fulfills this purpose, as does mention of any substantive followup on any new concept or idea encountered. Be sure to not give everything all A's as that would look suspicious, and even if something is "perfect," there's still something to write on about it. | ||
This has been an illustration of how easy it is to do the writing assignments by demonstrating reading comprehension.